Here are the first 2 episodes of a thing I’ve been working on called Kerslash. It’s kind of a love letter to the kind of stuff I used to watch on Saturday mornings and other pop culture-y things. I started the first episode in 2011 and am currently working on the 3rd one, with no real schedule or anything.
Guy… I loved it! I just watched the first episode on my lunch break and I really enjoyed the setup. The flow is good, the character personalities are clear, and the staging is interesting (you tend to choose slight birds/worms eye views for your character shots which is a really nice touch).
Then I watched the second one. I don’t know if that was done 6 years later (you mentioned that you did the first one in 2011) but the color and lighting are definitely more refined and it fits the illustration style much better. I enjoyed the voice acting in the first one a bit better because if felt a bit more energetic – though I know it was the same voice actors I can see in the credits. On the subject of the voices, I would suggest using a compressor (or if you did already, a more aggressive one) because the mix fluctuates a bit, I had to keep sitting forward and backward in my chair to get closer or farther away from my computer speakers based on the moment so I could hear everything or get distances from the louder parts.
Overall I’m very interested in seeing more of these! How long did the second episode take you?